Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, April 2, 2019
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Hi Jayden its George, I like the way you put the Gucci and obey things in.
ReplyDeleteMaybe not put the electric arms in cause it looks like there arms are having a spas but good job.
they are supposed to be muscles.
Deletekia ora Jayden you are really good at making animations,it looks like you have seemed to put a lot of work into it maybe next time don't put too many brands and make some of your own brands from Jack :)
ReplyDeletehi Jayden its Leo i like your animation. it reminds me of the election you have put a lot of work into it its 300 slides long that's very long. i like how you made the guy look like he had muscles with the lightning arms.
ReplyDeletethanks for the feedback.
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DeleteI like how you changed how everybody looked. I like how you used words that were different than what the teachers asked. Maybe next time you could give real arms and put full stops at the end.
ReplyDeletethanks for the feedback.
DeleteHello Jayden, I liked that you made your animation so so funny. It reminded me of when I did my animation. Maybe you could make it a bit shorter because the slides repeated a lot.
ReplyDeleteoh ok thanks for thye feedback.
ReplyDeletethanks for the feedback i mean.
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