Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, May 17, 2019
queen
For writing, I have had a choice to do what I wanted to write and I chose Queen. To learn more read the slide.
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Hi Jayden I love your slide about Queen and learned how Queens back story. maybe next time you could write the age when they came to came together and what age they were. 10 out of 10.
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ReplyDeleteI like how you included who was in the band.You taught me who Freddie mercury is and the history behind him.next time you could include something about everyone in the band and not just one person. From Sree
Hi Jayden i like the way you set out the page numbers
ReplyDeleteHi Jayden, I like how you made an index and the picture on Slide 4 was really good
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