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Friday, May 29, 2020
Elephants
this is my informational report that we had to do in literacy about all types of elephants African, Asian and Indian.
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hi Jayden ephants actually eat that much!my favourite page is the Asian elephant page because they evolved from mammoths and I don't know they actually have 40000 muscles You might want to add more pictures by Shannan :)
ReplyDeleteHi this is Jaydee and i like your elephants report and it is true elephants have 40,000 so Bye
ReplyDeleteThanks for the feedback!
DeleteHi Jayden
ReplyDeleteWow do African elephants have the biggest ears? What an interesting fact! I love elephants and hate it when they get mistreated, What source did you use?
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