Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, July 31, 2020
ten things you can do during winter
Hey, in school I had to write down ten things to do during winter and this is my work hope you enjoy!
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Hi Jayden Sree here, I really loved your background on the title page. This reminded me during quarantine when I did some of these things. Next time you could have a longer description. Great Job:)
ReplyDeleteHey Jayden my names George,this was kinda interesting to go through maybe you could've taken photos of you doing those things do you do any sports? But it was very cool good job!
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Tillie I go to Ahipara school I do all of those things but not the last one but good job
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